Two Little Step Brothers Although both can’t be any different Both are good boys Continue to grow big Day pass from not seeing them Everyone says that all of my Father’s children look alike even with different mothers
I really like this poem (it's one of my favorites) and the meaning behind it. You chose very nice metaphors and choices of words. The only suggestion I have is putting a period after every new statement. Besides that, this is great!
I like the strong message of this poem and I can relate, because there are many people who judge a person by their color. Your color doesn't define you, your attitude and the way you carry yourself does.
We Describe Family As friends who Will always be Close to the heart. When tears are shed from Thy eyes, we can rely On family to be close. Family always there for us. In any need of help, we rely For family to be right there to comfort.
Memories They remind us what good times we have, For which brings us laughter and joy. Describes what we remember. These are what we pass down. Trying to remind, Can be tearful. The tears are What brings Joy.
I liked 'the tears are what brings us joy.' It's an all around good poem and straight to the point. I'm not sure what type of poem you were doing, but does it require capitalization on every new line?
Although experiences are painful, Basic actions like touching an oven Can teach us later on to learn. Doings of past years, Exposure teaches us. Fragile body we learn from past movements.
You lost me on the part with the oven. Maybe try describing what you were referring to. It seems as if it shouldn't be there. The other lines make since. Good job
Death, Is hard To deal with, But in the end Souls go to a place Where there is no more pain. Suffering is the worst part In the undertaking of life. Smile my friend, you shall see them once more. The messiah is not dead and shall arrive.
The way you talked about Chipper Jones and how famous he is by saying "Has fans blowing up is phone" I thought it was funny. What did you mean by "also a ball slayer", like how good he was at baseball? Capitalize the word "also" on the fourth line to make it better.
What exactly does flabbergasting mean? The fourth lines has the word floods, I think you should change the word, because flood doesn't relate to sunshine.
The first two nouns in line four are meant to describe the top subject, therefore the last two nouns are meant to describe the bottom subject @Quamesha Hughley
Listen Listen to what they say It may take a little pay You’ll be together until the end They may even be your best friend
Love Love them with all your heart Even when you feel like you wanna part It may seem impossible But love is implausible
Talk Communicate over anything It’s always the best thing You may not always agree Sometimes just let it be
Take a stand With your right hand Swear to be the best to your sibling Even though it may seem daring. Get along with each other It will help out your mother
Win My heart beats so fast for the big win over the football championship night game fans going wild in the stands cheering for the high school teammates all the players giving it their all just to show their glory on the big field
ABC Aaliaha is The Best Because I Love Myself Can’t Nobody Take My Pride Away Dont ever let anybody say otherwise Even Though i may feel like that For What Though? Gods greatest angel Is Me HOnesty Is my Biggest Trait I love Me Some Me Just Joking Though Kind of Serious in a way Love Me Forever More Than anything Never turn on myself Over Everything except God Perfect? never THAt Quiet? Never That Either Rocking By Myself Somebody Hate Me Tyshon Until I Die Understand Myself Valuable in Every Way. Well I’M Gone I’m Just aaliaha!
The way you talked about the city by giving specific examples as well as talking about the country by giving specific examples, I thought was really well. In what way did you mean by " busy, loud"? Were you meaning the traffic and all the noise that goes on in the city? To make this better, I think instead of talking about the noise, maybe talk about the people and how the lifestyle is when in a city or when in the country.
Abide with the hardships Because they are only temporary Create new memories Don’t waste such a rarity Embrace the bonds you’ve made ‘cause Friendships that are true won’t fade
When you talked about the qualities of a man, I thought it was wonderful. I knew exactly what you meant in this poem. Overall I do not think there needs to be any changes made to this.
I understand where you're going in the poem, but you are required to include more nouns and adjectives in a Lanterne poem. I had to correct myself on my poem as well. I see that hounds are a type of dog.
This poem, expresses your feelings about the way you feel about music. I understand what your saying because music is to describe people's feelings and reactions to the ways of the world. I Like It its Unique and has a Message.
Warm colors cover a summer green, Morning greets with early crisp air, Heat replaced by cool breezes, sleeveless shirts put away. Earth crunches beneath your covered feet. Streets paved with yellow leaves.
Pawley’s Island dwells upon carolina sand and the salty, smooth marshes that history flows. Where country meets blue ocean and handmade woven hammocks.
Ewwww. Apple Pie So Nasty To Me. But I guess other people like it, I like the poem although the subject got me on edge. i like the words and imagery you used. it made me want to go try some. one last time. lol.
Children When I see beauty all around me When everyone's sweet and gentle When my heart is full of joy When love's blooming inside I know she is there The child in me Genuine Pure
I thought it was great the way you described children and the way how you feel about them. What were you meaning in the line "When love's blooming inside"? Were you meaning how loving they are? To make this better, you could add how children affect you in different ways.
Do not stand at my grave and weep: I am not there; I do not sleep. I am a thousand winds that blow, I am the diamond glints on snow, I am the sun on ripened grain, I am the gentle autumn rain. When you awaken in the morning’s hush I am the swift uplifting rush Of quiet birds in circling flight. I am the soft starshine at night. Do not stand at my grave and cry: I am not there; I did not die.
The rhyming moved nicely. There are a few misspellings, like 'their' should be 'they're', and 'prays' should be 'praise'. But I think you described the K-pop style very well!
Pet I have a dog name snow Everyday I feed her dog food made from ham Than she goes and look at me eating bread with jam Even time I call her name , she runs to me because she know
I thought it was great how you talked about food and their flavors, also the example you gave about food was great. I understood what you mean in your poem about the food and different relations to it. I think what could make this better is talk about a specific food.
ABC Jesus A misunderstood person Blessed and highly favored Couldn’t understand Doubted by many Encouraged by some Faith never shaken Going on with his life Heaven sent Is never giving up Jesus is the answer
I like you message and how you described Jesus. Every word fit his description. The only thing I a few people might be confused by is 'couldn't understand'. ( Although I'm sure you're referring to the people and not himself.)
Concrete Taco I am crunchy and delicious.I come in different flavors,Some flavors spicy and some sweet. Try me out, and you just might see that you actually like me. Juicy and delightful, people commonly describe me this way. A joyous treat, some might say.You can find me at the famous Taco Bell or I can be homemade. Many people have thought outside the box and made me into a salad and soup. Any way I am given. You're guaranteed to like me. I can be made in any way, shape, or form. The taste will still remain the same.
This poem is life. i love tacos for real they are everything you have said. The imagery and description that you used in this poem made the poem more lovable and made me like it. Great Job !
Nonet Music A escape from reality Composition, Harmony, Tune Numerous symphonies Unique, Discrete, Diverse Music is addicting Joyous to hear Lovely tunes
Tanka Fall Pretty colored leaves Some are yellow, some are green Season change, fall enters The wind blows also the leaves What a wonderful sight to see
ABC Siblings Dancing A little sister is dancing Big brother walks in Catches her from falling Dances with her Grabs her hand Even after they fall Fiercely stands back up and finishes amazingly
Yesssss Girl. I Love My Lil brother and sister. SIblings Are the best sometimes because in some cases they will be the only people to ride with you than these so called friends. your poem put me in the mind of my siblings!
Etheree Love Love, A word, You can hurt In many ways, You feel amazing, You’re not just a word said Trying to leave makes it hurt, You can’t come and go as you please You’re peace in the middle of a war, You’re a fight but something worth fighting for.
Nonet Sleep and Eat I wish I could just stay in my bed, and eat all my food in the house. but i can’t do that because I am too lazy to get out of my bed. So I lay here starving and dying night
Etheree DEATH Death My Mom Every Thing Hate She Left Me Built My Confidence It Made Me See The Truth I Love You Forever Mom You Taught Me A Lot To Learn From You Made Me Realize The Real And Fake Maybe We Can Meet Again This LifeTIme
Money Is All i ever wanted It Makes the world rotate in motion Money Doesn't grow on trees I Want to make my own Who understands? The Stress i have i can’t wait for my Day. -Nonet
All I ever needed to know was laid Bare when our faces met.
Captivating, isn't it - your smile, your Dazzling eyes and the glitter in your hair. Eternal fire reaching out From under your skin. My skin.
Gladly do I pledge my oath to you Henceforth I belong to you and you alone. I know that someday things may change, but Just this once I hope this is forever. Keeping my faith in you - in us - I Learn how strong my heart has become.
Memories are what we make of them, so Never waste your time on resentment and fear. Oftentimes we think we are not worthy of the Patience and devotion of another human being. Quite the opposite (I've learned) is true and I am Relying on you to be there for me always, Same as I am there for you; Together forever, hand in hand, arm in arm, Us as one.
Velvet is the softest fabric and a Whisper is the softest sound. Like an X-ray you see through me, clearly, but Your gaze is softer than the feather down. Zoom in on my eyes and you will know. I love you.
I am a well known shape. I have four equally sides. My sides are very straight.Look throughout my words and you will see the shape that I am most meant to be. Look closely to see a small square.You also learn me in school in your math class.So practice me and you will see and know more of me.
Nonet I want to stay in fall forever I don’t like the hot season’s bugs During cold seasons you can Go outside and not have To deal with the bees It seems calmer This is why I like Fall
Your poem was great due to how you talked about the season and why you liked Fall. I understood the meaning of the poem and how it affected you. What you could do to enhance it is add a period after the word "calmer".
Hard noodles boiled until stringy and soft Drained and poured in bowl Juicy big meatballs combined into soft noodles Tomato paste displayed on top Shredded cheese added to top Baked garlic bread Treat !!!!
I love new born babies and toddlers. They are gorgeous and sweet babies Laughter and giggles all day Banging toys and cute smiles I’m mostly acquainted to Joy of seeing smiles Until they go on home
Fall Autumn My favorite Time of the year Beautiful colors Gorgeous decorations And comfortable weather Dressing up and trick-or-treating Raking leaves and roasting marshmallows I love this season called Autumn or Fall!
one so sweet so antique she is known as my great grandmother many days i miss her living in Oklahoma its hard to see one another only getting time on some summers i wish i could see my great grandmother
Grow, I grow, I am grown, I grow from things, I grow from the past, But now is the present, So i must continue to grow, I learn to grow by my friends, Friends come and go but some stay, But the ones who stay help you grow to bigger and better things,
I wish I could go to sleep right now In my warm and comfortable bed Dreaming and sleeping soundly Please do not wake me up If I could sleep all Day long that would Be super Great to Me
The poem is called Ninette. You inserted the syllables as you were suppose to and I like very much that you wrote the poem about sleep. I love sleeping myself, actually.
Ashton Kutcher
ReplyDeleteNever played a butcher
Promoted Punk’d
But never got punked
I Like This Poem, Its Very Unique. Like I Was Trying To Think Of Somebody And He Never Came To My Mind.
DeleteMen
ReplyDeletebuild homes
and boys shack
they are teachers
Care
I like this poem. but the last word made me think a little. like where did the word care come from? Are you saying that men are caring or something?
Delete
ReplyDeleteSmiles
Beams, grins,
twinkling, leering, smirking
teeth, gracious, laugh, delightful
disturbing, glaring, scowling
sulk, grimace
Frown
Love
ReplyDeleteA peaceful thing
feelings covering heart
if it would know me
the caring thing is that
it give hurt like a knife
grandma
ReplyDeleteloving
caring too
she’s very outgoing
amazing and beautiful cook
funny
I Like This Poem, Because I Miss My Grandma And She Was Everything You Explained In This. Grandmas are always the BEST!
DeleteTwo Little Step Brothers
ReplyDeleteAlthough both can’t be any different
Both are good boys
Continue to grow big
Day pass from not seeing them
Everyone says that all of my
Father’s children look alike even with different mothers
I am fond of how the first and last line rhymes. The theme of the poem is emotional.
DeleteMy Color
ReplyDeleteWhat about my color
Does it hurt you
For me to be this color
Do I have to be
Who you think I am
Does it scare you to know
For you to wake up like a storm
Just to ask me what am I
For you to lay down like the cloud
It’s me to tell myself
who I am and what i'm going to be
Its not what you say
to me that defines me
Why is it that my color matter so much
to you like it does
to me, my color is not all of me
but part of me
I really like this poem (it's one of my favorites) and the meaning behind it. You chose very nice metaphors and choices of words. The only suggestion I have is putting a period after every new statement. Besides that, this is great!
DeleteI love the context of your poem. In the second phrase I was a bit confused. The theme of your poem is strong, I really enjoyed reading it.
DeleteI like the strong message of this poem and I can relate, because there are many people who judge a person by their color. Your color doesn't define you, your attitude and the way you carry yourself does.
DeleteMy Day
ReplyDeletehome
my friends
working places
fangirl & otaku
sleep
Taco Salad
ReplyDeleteCorn, tomato sauce, and lettuce
Ground beef with cheese wow
Sour cream, tortilla chips
Mix it all in one
So much to combine
Perfecto
Ate!
I like the poem, but you need to or can put a colon after the word "Salad."
DeleteThe way you described Taco Salad is so accurate. Your words are vivid
DeleteFriends
ReplyDeleteFriends
cheerful caring
talking, riding, smiling
family, classmates, bullies,convicts
hating, despising, yelling
mad mean
enemies.
You forgot to put a space after "bullies,"
DeleteBut well said poem
Did you mean to not put a comma between " cheerful caring" or you just for got to put it.
DeletePizza
ReplyDeletePizza is the happiness
That follows in sauce
Mozzarella tops the sauce
Toppings that fall to
Come together that
Savor the
Flavor!
I don't really understand
Delete"Toppings that fall to
Come together that"
Maybe try to reword that or change it.
I do like the rhyme at the end
I don't got or understand "that follow in sauce" , you can word it in a different way.
DeleteFamily
ReplyDeleteWe
Describe
Family
As friends who
Will always be
Close to the heart.
When tears are shed from
Thy eyes, we can rely
On family to be close.
Family always there for us.
In any need of help, we rely
For family to be right there to comfort.
Really strong in word selection. Really good.
DeleteFlows nicely
Good word choices. I really like this poem a lot.
DeleteLife
ReplyDeleteHeart
That makes
The sound of
Beat that is with
us
I don't really understand the last two lines.
DeleteMaybe try and substitute it with words that describe a certain beat.
maybe a sound.
Memories
ReplyDeleteThey remind us what good times we have,
For which brings us laughter and joy.
Describes what we remember.
These are what we pass down.
Trying to remind,
Can be tearful.
The tears are
What brings
Joy.
very good, Everything made since, and the words flowed nicely
DeleteI liked 'the tears are what brings us joy.' It's an all around good poem and straight to the point. I'm not sure what type of poem you were doing, but does it require capitalization on every new line?
DeleteSaturdays are the
ReplyDeleteTime for relaxation and
Day in which friends come
Over to keep company
For the joy in happiness.
I thought joy is the synonym for happiness? The last line of this poem is confusing. Overall, the poem is wonderful.
DeleteRelates to my every Saturday. lol Really like this one
DeleteExperiences
ReplyDeleteAlthough experiences are painful,
Basic actions like touching an oven
Can teach us later on to learn.
Doings of past years,
Exposure teaches us.
Fragile body we learn from past movements.
You lost me on the part with the oven. Maybe try describing what you were referring to. It seems as if it shouldn't be there. The other lines make since. Good job
DeleteAt the big ballpark
ReplyDeleteBats a swingin’
Catching fly balls
Diving for home plate
Every run crucial
Fighting for the big victory
You forgot to put the title of your poem.
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ReplyDeleteDeath,
ReplyDeleteIs hard
To deal with,
But in the end
Souls go to a place
Where there is no more pain.
Suffering is the worst part
In the undertaking of life.
Smile my friend, you shall see them once more.
The messiah is not dead and shall arrive.
I really like the tone of this poem. It is encouraging and uplifting.
DeleteVery meaningful poem, loved everything about this poem. It's very heartfelt and touching
DeleteChipper Jones
ReplyDeleteHas fans blowing up his phone
He was a baseball player
also a ball slayer
The way you talked about Chipper Jones and how famous he is by saying "Has fans blowing up is phone" I thought it was funny. What did you mean by "also a ball slayer", like how good he was at baseball? Capitalize the word "also" on the fourth line to make it better.
DeleteYes I was referring to how good he was at baseball, and will do @William Sellers
Deletelove the poem, its so funny when you put "Has fans blowing up his phone".
DeleteDiamante
ReplyDeleteSunshine
warm, bright
exciting, flabbergasting, laughing
beach, lake, floods, umbrellas
crying, moping, complaining
bad, undelightful
Darkness
What exactly does flabbergasting mean? The fourth lines has the word floods, I think you should change the word, because flood doesn't relate to sunshine.
DeleteThe first two nouns in line four are meant to describe the top subject, therefore the last two nouns are meant to describe the bottom subject @Quamesha Hughley
DeleteDidactic
ReplyDeleteListen
Listen to what they say
It may take a little pay
You’ll be together until the end
They may even be your best friend
Love
Love them with all your heart
Even when you feel like you wanna part
It may seem impossible
But love is implausible
Talk
Communicate over anything
It’s always the best thing
You may not always agree
Sometimes just let it be
Take a stand
With your right hand
Swear to be the best to your sibling
Even though it may seem daring.
Get along with each other
It will help out your mother
I love the poem, the way all you line go prefect it means
DeleteBarack Obama
ReplyDeleteGot Rid Of Osama
We Can’t All Be Dead
Let’s.. Go To Bed .
-Clerihew
Etheree
ReplyDeleteWin
My heart
beats so fast
for the big win
over the football
championship night game
fans going wild in the stands
cheering for the high school teammates
all the players giving it their all
just to show their glory on the big field
Lanterne
ReplyDeleteGirls
drama
texting guys
low self esteem
Gals
ABC
ReplyDeleteAaliaha is The Best
Because I Love Myself
Can’t Nobody Take My Pride Away
Dont ever let anybody say otherwise
Even Though i may feel like that
For What Though?
Gods greatest angel Is Me
HOnesty Is my Biggest Trait
I love Me Some Me
Just Joking Though
Kind of Serious in a way
Love Me Forever
More Than anything
Never turn on myself
Over Everything except God
Perfect? never THAt
Quiet? Never That Either
Rocking By Myself
Somebody Hate Me
Tyshon Until I Die
Understand Myself
Valuable in Every Way.
Well I’M Gone I’m Just aaliaha!
The subject of the poem is how you depend on yourself. Really good subject, because you come in this world alone and you die alone.
DeleteDiamante
ReplyDeleteCity
busy, loud
bustling, honking, hurrying
skyscrapers, streets, dirt, woods
fishing, hunting, farming
quiet, slow
Country
The way you talked about the city by giving specific examples as well as talking about the country by giving specific examples, I thought was really well. In what way did you mean by " busy, loud"? Were you meaning the traffic and all the noise that goes on in the city? To make this better, I think instead of talking about the noise, maybe talk about the people and how the lifestyle is when in a city or when in the country.
DeleteI love the way you changed your poems subject from city to country. The way you described the city was so accurate.
DeleteGood job on describing the city and the country. Really good word choices for this poem.
DeleteCinquain
ReplyDeleteAaliaha
Abnormal, Different
Loving, Caring, and Stylishly
I Love My Self.
ATL
ABC
ReplyDeleteFriendship
Abide with the hardships
Because they are only temporary
Create new memories
Don’t waste such a rarity
Embrace the bonds you’ve made ‘cause
Friendships that are true won’t fade
What is the meaning of rarity? Good use of word choice. The description in the poem about friendships is very true.
DeleteThe last line of this poem is amazing and meaningful; Friendships that are true won't fade.
DeleteMan
ReplyDeleteis strong
very rich
uniquely made
wonderful
soul mate
Woman
When you talked about the qualities of a man, I thought it was wonderful. I knew exactly what you meant in this poem. Overall I do not think there needs to be any changes made to this.
DeleteEpulareya
ReplyDeleteCrab legs are ocean’s delight
boiled to perfection
Steamy buttered meat glistens
Delicate and sweet
Savory juices
Buckets of
Joy!
I think you should replace the word meat with shell in line 4. I enjoyed the poem, because crab legs are delicious and I liked your description of it.
DeleteLanterne
ReplyDeletedogs
barking
wagging tails
chasing cats
hounds
I understand where you're going in the poem, but you are required to include more nouns and adjectives in a Lanterne poem. I had to correct myself on my poem as well. I see that hounds are a type of dog.
DeleteDiamante
ReplyDeleteMusic
Love , Hate
Crying, Laughing, Talking
Love, Rap, Hate, Real
Terrifying , Raging , Hating
Valuable, Agreeable
Life
Ninette
ReplyDeleteMusic
notes
lined up
to create
a pleasant sound
can be your abstract
escape from the
realness of
this true
world
This poem, expresses your feelings about the way you feel about music. I understand what your saying because music is to describe people's feelings and reactions to the ways of the world.
DeleteI Like It its Unique and has a Message.
Nonet
ReplyDeleteFall
Warm colors cover a summer green,
Morning greets with early crisp air,
Heat replaced by cool breezes,
sleeveless shirts put away.
Earth crunches beneath
your covered feet.
Streets paved with
yellow
leaves.
Tanka
ReplyDeletePawley’s
Pawley’s Island dwells upon
carolina sand
and the salty, smooth marshes
that history flows.
Where country meets blue ocean
and handmade woven hammocks.
Apple Pie
ReplyDeleteThanksgiving sweet apple pie
spicy cinnamon
soft white whipping cream on top
or a cheese delight
savoring
tasty treat
sweet.
Ewwww. Apple Pie So Nasty To Me. But I guess other people like it, I like the poem although the subject got me on edge. i like the words and imagery you used. it made me want to go try some. one last time. lol.
DeleteLady
ReplyDeleteGirls
Sassy
Know it all
Get what we want
She
Children
ReplyDeleteWhen I see beauty all around me
When everyone's sweet and gentle
When my heart is full of joy
When love's blooming inside
I know she is there
The child in me
Genuine
Pure
I thought it was great the way you described children and the way how you feel about them. What were you meaning in the line "When love's blooming inside"? Were you meaning how loving they are? To make this better, you could add how children affect you in different ways.
DeleteDancer
ReplyDeleteDance Pretty
And feel the pride
On Mom and Daddy's face
Stand on pointe in your ballet shoes
Graceful
Remembrance
ReplyDeleteSleepless, fitful nights,
Thoughts of you adhere.
Untouchable, love abounds.
Visions haunt me;
Memories sustain me
http://prezi.com/lf3peopiqfby/abc-poem/
DeleteDo Not Stand At My Grave and Weep
ReplyDeleteDo not stand at my grave and weep:
I am not there; I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow,
I am the diamond glints on snow,
I am the sun on ripened grain,
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning’s hush
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circling flight.
I am the soft starshine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry:
I am not there; I did not die.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Do_Not_Stand_at_My_Grave_and_Weep
DeleteK-pop
ReplyDeleteTheir the amazing think I see
Bands lovely as thee
Songs that encourage the fans
The love they give a cross the lands
Girls and boys look at them for days
They travel the world for love & prays
The cool and beautiful clothing they wear
Thier cool color and style of their hair
other people and friends can not see ,
why many boys and girls like k-pop like me.
The rhyming moved nicely. There are a few misspellings, like 'their' should be 'they're', and 'prays' should be 'praise'. But I think you described the K-pop style very well!
DeletePet
ReplyDeleteI have a dog name snow
Everyday I feed her dog food made from ham
Than she goes and look at me eating bread with jam
Even time I call her name , she runs to me because she know
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ReplyDeleteLanterne
ReplyDeleteFood
Flavors
Thanksgiving
Delicious Tastes
Great!!
I thought it was great how you talked about food and their flavors, also the example you gave about food was great. I understood what you mean in your poem about the food and different relations to it. I think what could make this better is talk about a specific food.
DeleteABC
ReplyDeleteJesus
A misunderstood person
Blessed and highly favored
Couldn’t understand
Doubted by many
Encouraged by some
Faith never shaken
Going on with his life
Heaven sent
Is never giving up
Jesus is the answer
I like you message and how you described Jesus. Every word fit his description. The only thing I a few people might be confused by is 'couldn't understand'. ( Although I'm sure you're referring to the people and not himself.)
DeleteDiamante
ReplyDeleteChanging Seasons
Fall
cool, delightful
biking, walking, having fun
snow, rain, sunshine gone
cold, dreadful
winter
The transition from fall to winter was well done. Instead of 'sunshine gone', how about sleet or ice?
DeleteClerihew
ReplyDeleteVictoria Justice
Outraged and disgusted,
Never Adjusted
To the fame.
Concrete
ReplyDeleteTaco
I am crunchy and delicious.I come in different
flavors,Some flavors spicy and some sweet. Try me
out, and you just might see that you actually
like me. Juicy and delightful, people commonly describe
me this way. A joyous
treat, some might say.You can find me at the
famous Taco Bell or I can be homemade. Many
people have thought outside the box and made me into a
salad and soup. Any way I am given. You're guaranteed to like me.
I can be made in any way, shape, or form. The taste will still remain the same.
This poem is life. i love tacos for real they are everything you have said. The imagery and description that you used in this poem made the poem more lovable and made me like it. Great Job !
DeleteNonet
ReplyDeleteMusic
A escape from reality
Composition, Harmony, Tune
Numerous symphonies
Unique, Discrete, Diverse
Music is addicting
Joyous to hear
Lovely tunes
Tanka
ReplyDeleteFall
Pretty colored leaves
Some are yellow, some are green
Season change, fall enters
The wind blows also the leaves
What a wonderful sight to see
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ReplyDeleteABC
ReplyDeleteSiblings Dancing
A little sister is dancing
Big brother walks in
Catches her from falling
Dances with her
Grabs her hand
Even after they fall
Fiercely stands back up and finishes amazingly
Relatives are the best thing to write about, because you have many memories together. I love the content of the poem.
DeleteYesssss Girl. I Love My Lil brother and sister. SIblings Are the best sometimes because in some cases they will be the only people to ride with you than these so called friends. your poem put me in the mind of my siblings!
DeleteClerihew
ReplyDeleteDaniel Humphrey
Mr. Daniel Humphrey
Was very frumpy.
He was grumpy
And his sister was slumpy.
Etheree
ReplyDeleteLove
Love,
A word,
You can hurt
In many ways,
You feel amazing,
You’re not just a word said
Trying to leave makes it hurt,
You can’t come and go as you please
You’re peace in the middle of a war,
You’re a fight but something worth fighting for.
Lanterne
ReplyDeleteSoccer
Girls
Scoring
Running fast
Kicking the ball
Team
Ninette
ReplyDeleteSummer
June
Arrives
So slowly
Suddenly hot
Pools open up now
Skin gets darker
Hair lightens
long nights
June
Nonet
ReplyDeleteSleep and Eat
I wish I could just stay in my bed,
and eat all my food in the house.
but i can’t do that because
I am too lazy to
get out of my bed.
So I lay here
starving and
dying
night
I'm pretty sure everyone can relate to this. Thank you for putting this into words. The only change I would make is to capitalize the 'I' in line 3.
DeleteTanka
ReplyDeleteHow do I do this
Why are they so confusing
I have lost my mind
I do not know what to do
I did not do this poem.
Etheree
ReplyDeleteDEATH
Death
My Mom
Every Thing
Hate She Left Me
Built My Confidence
It Made Me See The Truth
I Love You Forever Mom
You Taught Me A Lot To Learn From
You Made Me Realize The Real And Fake
Maybe We Can Meet Again This LifeTIme
Lanterne
ReplyDeleteFamily
Loving
I Love Them
It’s Sometimes HAte
REaL
Money
ReplyDeleteMoney Is All i ever wanted
It Makes the world rotate in motion
Money Doesn't grow on trees
I Want to make my own
Who understands?
The Stress i have
i can’t wait
for my
Day.
-Nonet
All I ever needed to know was laid
ReplyDeleteBare when our faces met.
Captivating, isn't it - your smile, your
Dazzling eyes and the glitter in your hair.
Eternal fire reaching out
From under your skin. My skin.
Gladly do I pledge my oath to you
Henceforth I belong to you and you alone.
I know that someday things may change, but
Just this once I hope this is forever.
Keeping my faith in you - in us - I
Learn how strong my heart has become.
Memories are what we make of them, so
Never waste your time on resentment and fear.
Oftentimes we think we are not worthy of the
Patience and devotion of another human being.
Quite the opposite (I've learned) is true and I am
Relying on you to be there for me always,
Same as I am there for you;
Together forever, hand in hand, arm in arm,
Us as one.
Velvet is the softest fabric and a
Whisper is the softest sound. Like an
X-ray you see through me, clearly, but
Your gaze is softer than the feather down.
Zoom in on my eyes and you will know. I love you.
http://www.thinkwrites.com/4248/alphabet-poem
DeleteSally the odd looking dog
ReplyDeleteOn her bed she waited .
Staring out the window
To catch the morning breeze
Square
ReplyDeleteI am a well known shape. I have four equally sides.
My sides are very straight.Look throughout my words
and you will see the shape that I am most meant to be.
Look closely to see a small square.You also learn me
in school in your math class.So practice me and you will
see and know more of me.
Candy
ReplyDeleteSweet, sour
eating , mouth watering, flavoring,
Reeses, Snickers, Broccoli, Carrots
crunching, cooking, washing,
nasty, terrible
Vegetables
What type of poem is this? Diamante?
DeleteNonet
ReplyDeleteI want to stay in fall forever
I don’t like the hot season’s bugs
During cold seasons you can
Go outside and not have
To deal with the bees
It seems calmer
This is why
I like
Fall
Your poem was great due to how you talked about the season and why you liked Fall. I understood the meaning of the poem and how it affected you. What you could do to enhance it is add a period after the word "calmer".
DeleteSpaghetti
ReplyDeleteHard noodles boiled until stringy and soft
Drained and poured in bowl
Juicy big meatballs combined into soft noodles
Tomato paste displayed on top
Shredded cheese added to top
Baked garlic bread
Treat !!!!
Dogs
ReplyDeletebarking
while playing
with other dogs
pups
Babysitting
ReplyDeleteI love new born babies and toddlers.
They are gorgeous and sweet babies
Laughter and giggles all day
Banging toys and cute smiles
I’m mostly acquainted to
Joy of seeing smiles
Until they
go on
home
Ninette
ReplyDeleteCats
Can be
Cute and nice
But other times
They can be evil
And they scratch you
Either way
I love
Cats
Diamante
ReplyDeletecats and dogs
Cats
Laidback, lazy
Running, hunting, clawing
Purring, meowing, scratching
Nap, claws, pups, paws
Barking, chewing, running
Hyper, friendly
dogs
Family
ReplyDeletetogether,wonderful
enjoying,laughing,exciting
granddad,grandma,mom,dad
working,cleaning,cooking
married,couple
parents
-Diamante
Lanterne
ReplyDeletebooks
reading
different tones
catches interest
page
Pizza love
ReplyDeleteTo make the best pizza
And the crust good
Follow the ingredients
And the best pizza will be made
Crust
Make it real fluffy
Don't over cook it
Make sure it isn't stiff
Sauce
Always get some sauce
Never overdo with the sauce
Remember to get tomato sauce
Meat
Make sure to use pepperoni
Don't get a lot of meat
Never get Meat Lovers it’s nasty
Instructions
Follow the instructions
Never miss any items
Always get the things that you need
-Didactic
Etheree
ReplyDeleteFall
Autumn
My favorite
Time of the year
Beautiful colors
Gorgeous decorations
And comfortable weather
Dressing up and trick-or-treating
Raking leaves and roasting marshmallows
I love this season called Autumn or Fall!
Etheree
ReplyDeleteGreat Grandmother
one
so sweet
so antique
she is known as
my great grandmother
many days i miss her
living in Oklahoma
its hard to see one another
only getting time on some summers
i wish i could see my great grandmother
Grow
ReplyDeleteGrow,
I grow,
I am grown,
I grow from things,
I grow from the past,
But now is the present,
So i must continue to grow,
I learn to grow by my friends,
Friends come and go but some stay,
But the ones who stay help you grow to bigger and better things,
-Etheree
Kids
ReplyDeletefighting
being friends
play
-Laterne
Epulaeryu
ReplyDeleteWrapped in white rice and seaweed
Small, bite size pieces
Red snapper, tuna, salmon
Green avocado
Cucumbers as well
Rainbow roll
Yum!
Diamante
ReplyDeleteMemories
Sorrowful, joyful
Depressing, pleasing, astonishing
Family, pets, music, nature
Losing, forgetting, disremembering
Amnesia
Clerihew
ReplyDeleteStiles Stilinski
Is a bit clumsy
His best friend is the alpha
And they live in California
Clerihew
ReplyDeleteMargaret Lynn may
Likes summer days
But the pollen from trees
Makes Margaret sneeze
ABC
ReplyDeleteAmanda Brown’s cat doesn't even find Garfield humorous.
Laughing kills Laura’s mood.Never open presents quietly.
Ratchet seahorses tailored ugly veils with XL yellow zebras.
Nonet
ReplyDeleteI wish I could go to sleep right now
In my warm and comfortable bed
Dreaming and sleeping soundly
Please do not wake me up
If I could sleep all
Day long that would
Be super
Great to
Me
Lanterne
ReplyDeleteHair
Tangled
Can’t be tamed
With just one small
Comb
This is cute and simple, I don't think there needs to be any changes.
DeleteThe poem is called Ninette. You inserted the syllables as you were suppose to and I like very much that you wrote the poem about sleep. I love sleeping myself, actually.
ReplyDeleteLight
ReplyDeletebright, shiny
brightening, blinding, irritating
sun, day, moon, night
hiding, sneaking, scaring
gloomy, shady
dark
guy
ReplyDeleteworking
getting paid
often happy
man
Tacos wrapped in tortilla
ReplyDeleteShell with Meat and cheese
Hot sauce on the meat and cheese
I eat tacos often
Ground beef with seasons
Amazing
Right!
Chris Cole
ReplyDeletedominates at Skating.
He is sponsored by Zero
by winning competitions.
Lebron James
ReplyDeleteFirst car was a Camry
He is scorned in Miami
Just like he once was in Cleveland.
Lebron James
ReplyDeleteFirst car was a Camry
He is scorned in Miami
Just like he once was in Cleveland.