Lobster drenched in gold butter, yummy brown sweet rolls, green crunchy salad with ranch, grilled 8 ounce filet, cooked to perfection, great tasting, sweet!
This poem is good. You used specific details in order to explain and describe the things that you were talking about within the poem. You also stayed with the topic, and used correct punctuation an grammar.
I’m proud of my free education, a lot of countries don’t get this, learning and playing football, are two great things in life, talking to my peers, class of sixteen, make it fun, work hard, learn.
Cat you are Horrible at being nice Sometimes you are nice but mostly you are mean you are nice to other people but you are never nice to me Oh well I do not like you either, HA! I have a nice dog so bye bye!
I am me I am Katelin I am short short is fun short is small small hands and feet small feet look like a dried up creek creek flows down the stream creek stream overflows with rain rain help our earth rain pours down down in the ground down in the town town is boring town is small small cars small house house in country house in woods woods are scary woods are dark dark backyard dark at night night falls night quiet quiet animals quiet creatures creatures crawl creatures bite bite itches bite make you scratch scratch the sore scratch my hand hand swollen hand hurts hurts from bite hurts from scratching scratching feels good scratching could be pain pain kills pain burn burn up burn it it’s fun its boring boring town boring ride ride in car ride through town town quiet town boring boring me boring you
A season like this everything must die Becomes cool and colorful Clouds covering the sky Football season so get prepared with your tool Gathering families together to enjoy the food if you dare Handing me a coat to keep warm in the cold I’d rather be in the house than to let this fall weather have its share
epulaeryu(pizza) Pizza with nice soft delicious dough Topped with pepperoni and cheese Sprinkled with garlic Crust stuffed with cheese Dough turning brown Cheese bubbling Stomach rumbling
Ball My Man You learn kids Many tricks How to handle it You bounce with confidence I must learn your skills Team leaders screaming pass the rock But I hope will pass with passion To get us a better set shot.
Homemade cornbread filled with sugar Sweet ham chopped cooking slow Tater salad mixed with onions Hot sauce with chicken Some meat & veggies My sole food is good !
Work I wish we didn’t have to come here The only good part is break Eating and talking Instead of walking I don’t like machines or black smoke I can’t wait for the bell
Football I love this game it never gets old The only boring part is groups They make us do lots of work We grind everyday I love doing teams and water break hitting hard be smart win
I am a very special and specific shape You may see me everywhere you go I have four sides and i look like a box My sides are straighter than ever you can see. I look like like a chessboard so come play with me. Students learn about in school everyday. I’m a square you should know.
Write a ticket Write Statements Statements from a witness Statements about a crime scene scene about a Murder case scene about Blood pool Pool of blood Pool of Blood trails Trails Trails
A big fan about old vehicles Believer of the Lord Cared about people Didn,t like the Military until he went to the Military Police Either watched old western movies or worked on his truck Found time to see his Grandchildren Got into Military when he was 23 years old He believed in not giving up on the things that you believe in In Roanoke is where he lived at James Brittain Ramsey Knew alot about old Vehicles Loved being a Military Police Officer Military Police Officer for 5 years Never gave up on life even when he had cancer On the military police force for 3 years
Dawn Coming Before me Tick.tock,tick tock it will reach me soon Go away, go away Will you stay away from me? The devil continues to come saying you must come and pay for your sins You are mine and hell is where you will stay
Sir Isaac Newton
ReplyDeleteStarted pootin
Sparked a flame
He was never the same
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DeleteAye that's funny and rhymes.
DeleteYour rhymes were right, but your capitalization is aslo good . This is a good poem
DeleteVery funny poem. Couldn't of done one better. Good job.
DeleteGreat poem. I like issac Newton because he is a proffesional, but you made it seem as if he plays around alot.
DeleteUncle Si
ReplyDeleteUncle Si
He’s a silly guy,
shot at a beaver,
hit with a cleaver.
thats kool
DeleteThats funny
DeleteFather’s silent pride
ReplyDeleteDiminished by His Own Son
By Leaving Today
To Never Return Again
But Always Loved by Himself
This relates to the poem from Daniel Beaty.
DeleteFall
ReplyDeleteArrives
Very Quick
When the Fish Swim
Tugging on my Lines
To Grab Hold of
My Worms for
Eating
Fall
Do you like to fish?
DeleteThunder Chicken
ReplyDeleteOn a warm spring day,
with my shotgun in my hands,
I wait for daybreak,
as does the thunder chicken,
for roosting time is over.
That sounds relazing
DeleteCat
ReplyDeleteSmall, Fluffy
Purring, Clawing, Hissing
Inside, Claw Post, Outside, Chew Toys
Running, Biting, Playing
Sweet, Playful
Dog
You used correct punctuation's,and also capitalization through out your poem.
DeleteLobster
ReplyDeleteLobster drenched in gold butter,
yummy brown sweet rolls,
green crunchy salad with ranch,
grilled 8 ounce filet,
cooked to perfection,
great tasting,
sweet!
that sounds delicious
DeleteThis poem is good. You used specific details in order to explain and describe the things that you were talking about within the poem. You also stayed with the topic, and used correct punctuation an grammar.
DeleteGame Day
ReplyDeleteWin
We must
Dominate
Drive the football
Feat
Ball
ReplyDeleteBouncing
Rolling fast
Bouncing off Walls
Toy
School
ReplyDeleteI’m proud of my free education,
a lot of countries don’t get this,
learning and playing football,
are two great things in life,
talking to my peers,
class of sixteen,
make it fun,
work hard,
learn.
Pizza is very good
ReplyDeleteIts sometimes good with ranch
Pizza is very great
I like the cheese
Pepperoni
is not good
YAY!
perfect
DeleteYour making me hungry.
DeleteGreat poem, but instead of using the word sometimes, try using a more diverse word.
DeleteYour poem is good, but instead of using is not you should of used isn't
DeleteDonald Trump
ReplyDeletelives in a trash dump.
He's an old rich man,
with a really bad tan.
too funny
DeletePhones
ReplyDeletePhone
Is more
Smart than us
It’ll take over
Life
Cat
ReplyDeleteyou are
Horrible
at being nice
Sometimes you are nice
but mostly you are mean
you are nice to other people
but you are never nice to me
Oh well I do not like you either, HA!
I have a nice dog so bye bye!
Cookies
ReplyDeleteThe cookies were nice and soft
Chocolate chips inside
Melts inside your mouth, chewy
hand made cookie dough
Best cookie ever
Delicious
Sweet
Girls
ReplyDeletelike to
have make-up
at their houses
Females
In this poem I think you should of left( House ) single instead of plural , but other than that I think you did a good job with everything else.
DeleteArt
ReplyDeleteOur art teacher, Mrs. Claw
Really knows how to draw
But she was an awful teacher,
She made me want to call a preacher
7
ReplyDeleteis a numeral
number following
the number six and
preceding the number eight
the fourth prime number
7 is the only number
dimension besides
three
A Tall man
ReplyDeleteAvery was a very tall man
Because he was so tall
Clumsy
Dog tripped him up
Every time he trips
Freaks out
God bless him
Cookies
ReplyDeleteCookies
Tastes delicious
So yummy and chewy
The best taste you will ever have
Desert!
snazzy
Delete
ReplyDeleteI am me
I am Katelin
I am short
short is fun
short is small
small hands and feet
small feet look like a dried up creek
creek flows down the stream
creek stream overflows with rain
rain help our earth
rain pours down
down in the ground
down in the town
town is boring
town is small
small cars
small house
house in country
house in woods
woods are scary
woods are dark
dark backyard
dark at night
night falls
night quiet
quiet animals
quiet creatures
creatures crawl
creatures bite
bite itches
bite make you scratch
scratch the sore
scratch my hand
hand swollen
hand hurts
hurts from bite
hurts from scratching
scratching feels good
scratching could be pain
pain kills
pain burn
burn up
burn it
it’s fun
its boring
boring town
boring ride
ride in car
ride through town
town quiet
town boring
boring me
boring you
ReplyDeleteApple
Juicy, Crunchy
Picking,Cutting, Eating,
The green apples are the best
Tasteful
What A Fall Season
ReplyDeleteA season like this everything must die
Becomes cool and colorful
Clouds covering the sky
Football season so get prepared with your tool
Gathering families together to enjoy the food if you dare
Handing me a coat to keep warm in the cold
I’d rather be in the house than to let this fall weather have its share
ReplyDeleteBasketball
playful, sport
running, playing, shooting
goals, speed,ball, court
winning, losing, screaming
fun, enjoyable
score
Kobe Bryant
ReplyDeleteNBA player
playing since he was seventeen
plays with Los Angeles Lakers
lanterne(video games)
ReplyDeletegame
yelling
scoring kills
capturing base
COD
ninette
ReplyDeleteGames
are taking
over the internet
and are getting better
,advanced, fun
and trival
kool
epulaeryu(pizza)
ReplyDeletePizza with nice soft delicious dough
Topped with pepperoni and cheese
Sprinkled with garlic
Crust stuffed with cheese
Dough turning brown
Cheese bubbling
Stomach rumbling
Sounds yummy.
DeleteEtheree
ReplyDeleteBall
My Man
You learn kids
Many tricks
How to handle it
You bounce with confidence
I must learn your skills
Team leaders screaming pass the rock
But I hope will pass with passion
To get us a better set shot.
Epulaeryu (Food)
ReplyDeleteHomemade cornbread filled with sugar
Sweet ham chopped cooking slow
Tater salad mixed with onions
Hot sauce with chicken
Some meat & veggies
My sole food is
good !
your praise is a little off. I think that you need more punctuations in the poem . the poem sounds good and delicious. To me this is a good job
DeleteLanterne
ReplyDeleteBoys
Shooting
Dribbling fast
Scoring points
Basketball
Nonet
ReplyDeleteWork
I wish we didn’t have to come here
The only good part is break
Eating and talking
Instead of walking
I don’t like machines
or black smoke
I can’t wait
for the
bell
Clerihew
ReplyDeleteKanye West
dresses the best.
When he goes shopping, he spend
a million on a vest.
This poem meets the definition of a clerihew--it made me smile!! The only correction I would suggest is "spends" instead of spend.
DeleteEpulaeryu
ReplyDeleteCandy is so nice and good
I can’t resist it
Candy comes in all colors
With caramel cream
Softly delicious
The taste is
Sweet
Nice job! You perfectly met the requirements on your syllable counts.
DeleteDiamante
ReplyDeleteLosing
Sad, mad,
crying, tearing, pouting
sayless, smiling, clapping, rumbling
horraying, jumping, proud
exciting, happy
Win
Lanterne
ReplyDeleteboys
shooting
running fast
scoring baskets
goals
Nonet
ReplyDeleteFootball
I love this game it never gets old
The only boring part is groups
They make us do lots of work
We grind everyday
I love doing teams
and water break
hitting hard
be smart
win
Concrete
ReplyDeleteI am a very special and specific shape
You may see me everywhere you go
I have four sides and i look like a box
My sides are straighter than ever you
can see. I look like like a chessboard
so come play with me. Students learn
about in school everyday. I’m a square
you should know.
Write a ticket
ReplyDeleteWrite Statements
Statements from a witness
Statements about a crime scene
scene about a Murder case
scene about Blood pool
Pool of blood
Pool of Blood trails
Trails
Trails
A big fan about old vehicles
ReplyDeleteBeliever of the Lord
Cared about people
Didn,t like the Military until he went to the Military Police
Either watched old western movies or worked on his truck
Found time to see his Grandchildren
Got into Military when he was 23 years old
He believed in not giving up on the things that you believe in
In Roanoke is where he lived at
James Brittain Ramsey
Knew alot about old Vehicles
Loved being a Military Police Officer
Military Police Officer for 5 years
Never gave up on life even when he had cancer
On the military police force for 3 years
Mother
ReplyDeleteJoyful, brilliant
Loving, caring, interesting
Angel, saint, Christian, steward,
helping, working, coaching, punishing
Bright, intelligence
Father
Race
ReplyDeleteExciting, fun
Driving, speeding, passing
Cars riding on the track
Nascar
Dawn
ReplyDeleteComing
Before me
Tick.tock,tick tock
it will reach me soon
Go away, go away
Will you stay away from me?
The devil continues to come
saying you must come and pay for your sins
You are mine and hell is where you will stay